Malo lelei Mary, It's nice seeing you participating in the Summer Learning Journey programme!!.This piece of writing was really amazing and creative with all the colour's but Maybe try to add more information to make it more interesting?...
Is it just me or did i just learn something. Well done Mary its awesome to see you participate in the summer learning programme. you really did tell me something about South Africa
Hey Mary, you put some details about South Africa. I really liked how you used tricky words and how you said you how you wanted to visit South Africa and I would like to come to South Africa with you to see amazing animals. You have to work on putting more details and put a image of South Africa.
Malo lelei Mary,
ReplyDeleteIt's nice seeing you participating in the Summer Learning Journey programme!!.This piece of writing was really amazing and creative with all the colour's but Maybe try to add more information to make it more interesting?...
Cheers,
Anita
Hello Mary,
ReplyDeleteNice work, Keep it up.
Alex
Is it just me or did i just learn something. Well done Mary its awesome to see you participate in the summer learning programme. you really did tell me something about South Africa
ReplyDeleteHey Mary, you put some details about South Africa. I really liked how you used tricky words and how you said you how you wanted to visit South Africa and I would like to come to South Africa with you to see amazing animals. You have to work on putting more details and put a image of South Africa.
ReplyDeleteWell Done Mary!