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I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs. Tofa
Friday, 28 August 2015
My Narrative.
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WALT - To write a narrative about a time at the mall with friends.
SC - A beginning middle and end… with a
moral to the story.
This story called Amelia's birthday party.
The wind was blowing through the trees, rustling quietly in the background. Amelia was at the park with her friend. They were playing on the swings. They are pushing themselves. So that they can fly by themselves and enjoy the swing. When they have finished playing on the swing they were playing on the monkeys bars and they was standing on the monkey bars and holding hands and walk together and playing lots and lots of games. When they finished playing on the monkey bars they went back home to go to a party at Amelia’s house because it was her birthday, so all of her family came to her birthday. While Amelia had been at the park, Mary had secretly baked a beautiful strawberry cake with pink icing and strawberries on the top. She went outside to say surprise to Amelia, and when she went back inside the cake was GONE! All that was left were some crumbs on the plate. So Mary dasen’t want to ruin Amelia's birthday party.So Mary quickly ran to the shopping and by a new birthday cake for amelia’s birthday.when Mary came back from the shopping, she quickly held Amelia’s hands and whispered “close her eyes and counts to 10”.
When Mary stopped counting to 10 Amelia opened her eyes and all of her family said “Happy Birthday”. So she started to scream, with excitement because she knows it is her birthday party today. Her parents were so happy that Mary got a birthday cake for amelia. All of her family sang her a birthday song before she blew out the candles on the cake.
Tuesday, 25 August 2015
Exploring blogs.
Today room 7 looked at different class blogs and this is what we discovered about their learning.
The world.
Audience
photos camera.
The world.
Persuasive
Crating
Learning
Maths
Wiring
Riding
Monday, 24 August 2015
My Cuboid.
Today Mrs Raj taught us how to measure and make a net
to create a 3 dimensional shape.
With Mrs Raj i learned how to make a cuboid which has 8 faces, 12 edges and 8
vertices. Boxes are made to hold or store things. Boxes are used for packaging.
I will use my cuboid to store my marbles.
Tuesday, 18 August 2015
Character Description:
Character Description:
MRS Parker has light green eyes like the leaves on the tree. She has a beautiful red straight hair.
Mrs Parker is tall like the fruit trees in the playground. She is helpful because she always teaches us how to learn more helpful. She’s really friendly because she always makes friends with other people and is kind to everyone.
Monday, 17 August 2015
Claire's Secret Ambition.
Claire's Secret Ambition by mary.
I created a new ending for the story..
Claire’s Mother worked in a local cinema. She showed the people to their seats.
Claire’s Mum wanted Claire to be a pop star so that Mum could show her off in the cinema.
Claire did not tell her mum that she did not like drama or acting but wanted to be a vet.
When she grew up she changed her mind and became a pop star.
Thursday, 13 August 2015
looking afther our teeth.
Looking after our teeth.
Today we went to the hall to learn how to look after our teeth. We have to always clean our teeth every morning and evening. If you don't brush your teeth then you'll get decay in your teeth. You also have to floss your teeth and eat healthy food with no sugar. I also learnt that coca cola is the most sold item out of 33.000 other supermarket items.
Monday, 10 August 2015
Henry the Explorer
Henry the Explorer.
Henry’s footprints iced over because it was so cold and he couldn't find his trail back home.
He needs to find a safe place to stay for the night.Mum will be very worried.Suddenly Angus
started sniffing the ground.”What are you sniffing on the ground “ said Henry. Angus kept sniffing
the ground and walking away.“Where are you going Angus?”Henry said. “Wait for me!” Henry
was tired and hungry but he kept following Angus who was still walking and sniffing the ground.”I
think we are lost Angus,” Angus started barking excitedly.Henry looked ahead and saw a Police car
with it’s lights on.He ran toward the lights and Angus was still barking and running.The Policeman
shone his torch at Angus and Henry.”Can you take me home please, I've been lost and my
dog Angus saved us.” “Your Mum will be glad to see you“ said the Policeman.
THE END.
Thursday, 6 August 2015
Maori performance.
Today room 7 visit Glen Innes Library.There where people from Auckland {Tamaki Maukarau} museum to tell us a story about two tribes and how Tamaki Makaurau got its mountains{Maunga} the tribes were called Turehu and Patupaiarehe and how Prince Danny and Princess Amelia who went finishing down at Queen St river{waihorotiu}feel in love and went to live with Turehe tribe.
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