My Narrative.

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WALT - To write a narrative about a time at the mall with friends.

SC - A beginning middle and end… with a

moral to the story.

This story called Amelia's birthday party.

The wind was blowing through the trees, rustling quietly in the background. Amelia was at the park with her friend. They were playing on the swings. They are pushing themselves.  So that they can fly by themselves  and enjoy the swing. When they have finished playing on the swing they were playing on the monkeys bars and they was standing on the monkey bars and holding hands and walk together and playing lots and lots of games. When  they finished playing on the monkey bars they went back home to go to a party at Amelia’s house because it was her birthday, so all of her family came to her  birthday. While Amelia had been at the park, Mary had secretly baked a beautiful strawberry cake with pink icing and strawberries on the top. She went outside to say surprise to Amelia, and when she went back inside the cake was GONE! All that was left were some crumbs on the plate. So Mary dasen’t want to ruin Amelia's birthday party.So Mary quickly ran to the shopping and by a new birthday cake for amelia’s birthday.when Mary came back from the shopping, she quickly held Amelia’s hands and whispered “close her eyes and counts to 10”.

When Mary stopped counting to 10 Amelia opened her eyes and all of her family said “Happy Birthday”. So she started  to scream, with excitement because she knows it is her birthday party today. Her parents were so happy that Mary got a birthday cake for amelia. All of her family sang her a birthday song before she blew out the candles on the cake.