Imagine that you are sitting in the crowd at the opening ceremonies for the Rio Olympics this August. The ceremony has just started and all of the Olympic athletes are parading around the stadium in their uniforms when all of a sudden…
In your blog, write an ending to this short story.
A special guest arrived to lead the ceremony he was so important fireworks went shooting up and kids began to scream!.He was there to lead the ceremony and give the prizes to the fellow athlete's.It was JOHN KEY!!!!.The Prime Minister of New Zealand.
THE CROWD WENT WILD!!!!!!!
Hi Mary!
ReplyDeleteI see that you and Anita decided to choose the same ending for your story. That is okay, although I'd much rather read your own, original idea. What do you think might happen? In order to earn the full 20 points you just need to add a few more sentences to your story. We are looking for between 10 and 20 sentences to earn full marks :)
I'll check back soon to see if you've had time to expand upon your story. I hope that you will!
Cheers, Rachel :)
Hay there Mary like the way that you have done your ending it just look like you copy Anita but any way great work there. I just wanted to do some blog commenting like we do at school haha.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up Mary:)
It's great to see you commenting, Setaita! Keep it up:)
DeleteCheers, Rachel